Caving In

6 thoughts on “Caving In”

  1. I’d agree with Daryl. And also, such imagery! You are good. I was particularly struck by “like flies from a dead man’s mouth.” Perfect. And yuck! πŸ˜€

      1. That’s something I want to work on in my own writing, honestly. I tend to stray away from details because I don’t know how to handle them! Lol… An image wasn’t needed. πŸ˜‰

      2. You know you missed an image. Oh, and imagery comes easy to me. It’s the other stuff that’s the challenge. We can help each other. πŸ˜‰

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